Saturday, September 27, 2008
three months everything gone....
Three months before i get everything i want, after three months all gone. But luckily i still got my family. i think i having bad mental problem. every night i cry. everyday i hate myself, everyday i hate people. what happen with me ???? issit i got mental problem ? issit i need to get help from counselor or pyscholgy? help!!!! i really do not know what happen with me. No one understand what i want !!! My life is very difficult, i do not know what to do next.....
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pearlie...hv faith wit God n urself...i heard u hv some kinda probs...even Miss Kon realised tat..she tot u were fallin' in love wit sum1...cheer up dude! chill...
btw, lots of grammatical errs!! haha, can be improved ryte?? happy hari raya!!
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Actually I m okie , just like I do not know why it is happen
But thank u for comment and advices
What is life ? Life is full of chanllenging . Sometimes we are happy sometimes we are sad in our life. To lives in this community or society we need to always understand and tolerate with the people so that we can made our work more easy. But as we know in this world there are many different of people in many chateristics. Why this happen? Maybe they grow in different environment and different family. We cannot judge them whether they are right or not. We need to understand them.Are they understand us? For my side i think they want me to understand them and they didnt even consider people feelings. Why it is happen ? Therefore , we need find some way to handle them, if not we are very difficult to live in this colourful. The way that had been suggested by my friend is wear mask while communicate with them. Dont even pleased them, let them what they do to you. Is difficult when we change our environment in sudden. Sometimes we cant easy to adopt the environment. So why not just wear mask during the time we communicate or we live together! This can help us to habdle this type of person.
I will explain your mistakes one by one accordingly.
1. Life is full of chanllenging.
2. To lives in…
3. ..we can made..
4. ..work more easy..
5. ..different of people..
6. ..chateristics..
7. Why this happen?
8. ..they grow..
9. Are they understand us?
10. ..people feelings..
11. Why it is happen?
12. ..some way..
13. ..we are very difficult to live in this colourful.
14. ..is wear mask
15. ..while communicate..
16. Dont..
17. ..pleased..
18. ..let them what they do to you..
19. Is difficult..
20. ..in sudden.
21. .. cant easy to adopt the environment.
22. ..during the time we communicate
23. ..habdle this type of person.
1. That is an obvious typo! Chanllenging does not exist in any dictionary, girl!
2. Word’s structures. ‘To’ must be followed by a rude verb, so instead of ‘to lives’, you should type: ‘to live’. Besides, the conjugation of the word ‘live’ is incorrect. We only put an ‘s’ behind a verb only when the verb refers to a subjective pronoun (he, she, it)
3. Tenses mistake. ‘Made’ is the past tense of the verb ‘make’. So think it yourself, why did you put past tense in your sentence? ‘We can made’: ‘we can make’.
4. Adjectives! Easy is an adjective, and there are also superlatives we can use to make our sentence shorter and simpler. ‘Work more easy’: ‘work easier’ (superlative), ‘work more easily’ (adverb).
5. Missing noun. What do ‘different of people’ means? ‘Different types of people’ sounds better!
6. ‘Chateristics’. Typing error again.
7. Tenses mistake, missing verb. In the sentence ‘why this happen?’ where is your auxiliary (if it is present)? ‘Why this happen’: ‘why does this happen’ (present), ‘why did this happened’ (past), ‘why this is happening’ (present continuous) ‘why this happens’ (present without auxiliary).
8. In this sentence, you must look at the context before deciding which tense to use. Basically, living things grew san cesse (continuously) and the verb ‘grow’ is a verb which provokes a past continuous action. ‘They grow’: ‘they grew’.
9. This sentence has the worst mistake among all! ‘Are they understand us?’: Do they understand us?'.
10. ‘People feelings’: ‘people’s feelings’.
11. Why it is happen? – refer to number 7.
12. Countable nouns! Add ‘s’! ‘Some way’: ‘some ways’.
13. Missing nouns, inappropriate word usage. ‘We are very difficult to live in this colourful.’: ‘It is very difficult for us to live in this colorful yet complicating life’.
14. ‘Is wear mask’: ‘is by wearing masks’, ‘is to wear a mask’.
15. ‘While communicate’: ‘while communicating’ (while must be followed by present/past continuous tense!)
16. Typo. ‘Dont’: don’t.
17. ‘Pleased’ why is this in past tense?
18. ‘let them what they do to you..’: let them do what they want to do to you.
19. ‘Is difficult’ (what is difficult?): ‘it is difficult’.
20. ‘in sudden.’ : ‘in a sudden’.
21. .’cant easy to adopt the environment’: ‘can’t adopt easily to the environment’ / ‘it is not easy for us to adopt to a new environment’.
22. ‘During the time we communicate’: ‘when communicating’ (shorter and simpler).
23. Typo. ‘Habdle this type of person.’: ‘Handle this type of person’
Hey girl. I came across your blog and found out so many grammatical errors, so i hope i can help. I will correct your text continuously so that you can understand better and have a better knowledge of English Language. Good Luck!
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